Your children is going to take a trip to another country with school which takes 3 day. Write to his/her teacher and say you would like to go with them. In your letter you should say:
• Why you would like to go with them
• How can you help in this trip
• Ask some questions about the trip
Dear Mr. Johnson,
My name is James Smith, Jack’s father, and I am writing this letter to inform you about my interest in accompanying you in the 3-day excursion to Paris, France.
First of all, I have to thank you for arranging this life-changing trip, and I am positive that it will expand their horizon as well as improve their cultural understanding of foreign people. And I would like to go with the students because my son has developed an inferiority complex recently, unfortunately, and I prefer to be close to him in order to control any possible appalling condition,
Second, I believe my presence will be of great value due to my French-speaking ability. Since I have been working for a French-speaking company, I know the best iconic places and monuments of the city. I can even act as the students’ tour guide in museums of the city.
Finally, I would appreciate it If you could tell me more about the details of this trip. For instance, the estimated cost of it and the type of accommodation that you have booked.
Thank you again for all your efforts and considerations for the students.
James Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, well, for instance, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80612244898 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97471294714 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7688017234 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226949739891 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788357269424 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582980691755 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123957365866 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624340913889 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.