Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on way back. Write a letter to the principal of the college and say- How did you lose the certificate?-

Essay topics:

Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on way back. Write a letter to the principal of the college and say

- How did you lose the certificate?

- Why do you need it?

- What do you expect the principal to do?

Dear sir,

I am student of your college.This is to bring to your notice that I lost the certificate on the way back.

In my hotel,when I was packed my bag, I was put this certificate in my bag's second drawer. After I m going for take a flight and Check out my documents. Suddenly I was realize that my certificate has been lost as well as I was try to found it but I fail.

My company has sent me to attend a course at College in your country. This. Certificate was vitally important to me and also our company cause of this certificate proves our company's progress. Further more, for new development of company ,we need it mostly just.

Hope you would understand the seriousness of the problem and resolve it as soon as possible.

Votes
Average: 9 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... sir, I am student of your college.This is to bring to your notice that I lost ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...ficate on the way back. In my hotel,when I was packed my bag, I was put this cer...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'realized'.
Suggestion: realized
... Check out my documents. Suddenly I was realize that my certificate has been lost as we...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompany has sent me to attend a course at College in your country. This. Certifica...
^^
Line 13, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...her more, for new development of company ,we need it mostly just. Hope you wo...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 614.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48175182482 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72475015608 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.5635448063 44.8134815571 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.75 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202403623234 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910926331441 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100093241863 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117994896265 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058745916075 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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