Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on way back. Write a letter to the principal of the college and say- How did you lose the certificate?-

Essay topics:

Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on way back. Write a letter to the principal of the college and say

- How did you lose the certificate?

- Why do you need it?

- What do you expect the principal to do?

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to ask if you would like to do me a favour to send me another copy of a certificate of the Big-data course.

I have just passed the exam of the course in your college and got the certificate several days ago. I was so glad that I booked the earliest flight to get back to my home country. But unfortunately, I lost my baggage in the taxi when I got off the airplane and took a taxi home. I have tried to contact the taxi driver and the company however, It's not work. There is nothing really important than the certificate.

The certificate is really important for me as with its help I could get promoted in my company. I know it is all my fault to get it lost, but I will really appreciate your help if you send me another copy of a certificate by mail.

Thank you in advance for your understanding and kindness.

Looking forward to your positive reply!

Yours Sincerely,

Vivek

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d got the certificate several days ago. I was so glad that I booked the earliest ...
^
Line 9, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... company however, Its not work. There is nothing really important than the certif...
^^
Line 13, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ertificate is really important for me as with its help I could get promoted in my...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4367816092 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61225705227 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8668261558 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257797546178 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906995642735 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654339125326 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128463314815 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543404791298 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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