Your friend had made a plan for you two to see a movie together but you cannot join him. You have found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear John,
I don’t think I can join you for the movie next weekend. I am really sorry about this. I really wanted to come because it has been a long time since we met.
Actually my son told me today that his school has organized a meeting for the parents of students and I really have to attend this meeting to understand his academic performance.
I know that you have already booked the tickets for the movie; therefore, I asked my younger brother and he confirmed that he could join you for the movie. My brother owns a car so he will be able to pick you up from your home.
Also, the last time we spoke, you had told me about starting an online business. My brother is an expert at it. He already owns some successful online ventures and I guess this will be a nice opportunity for you to learn the ropes from him. He is a friendly guy and I am sure you will have a nice time with him. Do let me know if he can join you for the movie.
Once again I’m really sorry for my unavailability.
Warm regards
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... weekend. I am really sorry about this. I really wanted to come because it has be...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, therefore, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30964467005 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34339704305 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558375634518 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3180101319 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.75 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233917099284 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838558756968 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772736149346 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113348064011 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082381757036 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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