Your friend has asked you to help him to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher.
In your letter, you should tell:
• what experience the teacher has
• why you think he/she is suitable
• how to get in touch with the teacher.
Dear Friend,
I am texting you to tell you that, I’ve me a music tutor last day at my shop, and I remembered that last time you asked me, if I know anyone suitable can teach your daughter how to play violent.
This man owns a musical school at the town center, he has more than 50 students, that are practicing under his supervision. He has more than 15 years’ experience in this sector and he’s a member of the national orchestra for 6 years until today.
From the way he talked and explained to me about his experience and education level in this field, he seems suitable to teach and assist your daughter; even to the images that I saw of the events that he organize for his students during Christmas Eve and summer festivals all over the town.
I’ll send you his business card details through email. Where you can contact and ask about everything you would like to know from his side; don’t forget to tell him that I told you to call him, to remember to offer you a discount for the first 5 months.
Give my best to everyone in the family, and we will stay in touch.
All the best,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Friend, I am texting you to tell you that, I&apo...
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Line 11, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... daughter; even to the images that I saw of the events that he organize for his s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52427184466 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38288209149 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3509444711 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309544195156 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109653504123 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992620422793 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140778682897 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101065192624 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.