Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare present for them. Write a letter and say- congratulate your friend- ask when would be possible for you to visit- ask what present they would like

Essay topics:

Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare present for them. Write a letter and say
- congratulate your friend
- ask when would be possible for you to visit
- ask what present they would like

Dear penny,
How are you? I hope you must be doing well. I'm writing this letter to express my gratitude for your inning of parenthood.

Many many congratulations dear. I was pleased to hear this wonderful news from your side. I know it's a novel experience for you. However, i hope you're enjoying it well as i knew you adore new challenges whole heartdely. Take care of yourself and baby properly as it is the most critical time.

I want to be with you as soon as possible as i can't wait to meet newly born princess. Moreover, i don't want to miss the chance to have some good time with you. Unfortunately, i have to delay my schedule owing to my final exam in the following month. It would be now in coming summer vacations.

I'm very excited to buy some beautiful gifts for the sweet little girl likewise soft toys, princess dress and barbie dolls. Although, if you have any other personal choice regarding present please feel free to say without any hesitation. I would be pleasure to know about.
Pass my regards to your family and lots of love to cute baby girl.
Take care and write back soon
Hazel

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear penny, How are you? I hope you must be doing we...
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Suggestion: I'm
...are you? I hope you must be doing well. Im writing this letter to express my grat...
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... hope you must be doing well. Im writing this letter to express my gratitude for ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
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Suggestion: Many
...tude for your inning of parenthood. Many many congratulations dear. I was pleased to ...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s wonderful news from your side. I know its a novel experience for you. However, i ...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ts a novel experience for you. However, i hope youre enjoying it well as i knew y...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: you're
...vel experience for you. However, i hope youre enjoying it well as i knew you adore ne...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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Suggestion: I
...wever, i hope youre enjoying it well as i knew you adore new challenges whole hea...
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Suggestion: I
...t to be with you as soon as possible as i cant wait to meet newly born princess. ...
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Line 6, column 48, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...to be with you as soon as possible as i cant wait to meet newly born princess. Moreo...
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...t to meet newly born princess. Moreover, i dont want to miss the chance to have ...
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Suggestion: don't
... meet newly born princess. Moreover, i dont want to miss the chance to have some g...
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...born princess. Moreover, i dont want to miss the chance to have some good time w...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... be now in coming summer vacations. Im very excited to buy some beautiful gift...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49753694581 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45619735227 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674876847291 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1350512454 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.7058823529 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9411764706 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254518685141 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734792535039 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450784898534 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11536443395 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625619209272 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.93 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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