Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should government give more financial support to local film industries?
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic change over the recent decade. Presently, it is claimed thatmajority of people have tendency to watch international blockbusters instead of local movies. Here, I would like to account for various reasons behind this phenomenon and privileges of providing monetary aids to native movies by the administration.
There are manifold reasons put behind this happening. First and foremost , people get stimulated towards foreign movies owing to its superior quality. To be specific, these films comprise innovative techniques, high-defination display , amazing adventurous activities which makes them marvelous. This, interest for western movies is gaining ground nowadays. Moreover, globalisation is also responsible to turn the whole world into a global village. To demonstrate, influence of foreign culture arouses masses towads adopting that culture at larger extent. Apart from it, individuals can easily access to internet sites to watch international blockbusters. Hence, the prevalence of foreign films is on the elevation.
Further emphasizing my view, foreign movies always represent a new script. Besides this, some people tend to watch these movies due to their choice of favourite celebrities. Thence, masses admire to enjoy western films more.
There are numerous benefits to provide financial support to local film industries. Initially , financial assistance provided to local industry could be lucrative to preserve culture. To illustrate, producers can use better locations, advanced animation, hd screens in order to make blockbusters more interesting and entertaining. Therefore, native individuals are expected to watch local movies. In augmentation, growth of film industry is also worthwhile for the development of a nation. For example, monetary aids given to indigenous film sector results in more earnings through making quality pictures. Hence, it is likely to boost the whole economy.
To recapitulate, growth in local cinema not only uplifts the living standard of native people but also its economy. Therefore, government should take proactive steps to preserve cultural and traditional values through local blockbusters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94603174603 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07291922478 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8974154834 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4347826087 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6956521739 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326747350614 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799700626022 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649478394066 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159080246186 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705841190285 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.9 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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