You have recently attended a 90th wedding anniversary of a close relative. It was successfully organised by hotel staff. Write a letter to the manager and say
- describe the event
-talk about the facilities provided to guests especially the elderly
-Mention a particular employee whose services was great
Dear Manager,
I am one of the guest who attended a birthday party organised in your hotel. The objective of inscribing this missive is to pay my regards for the extraordinary services provided by your hotel management.
Last week, i was invited for the birthday celebration of one of my closest uncle. Actually, he came back from Canada to commemorate this occasion with all his family and friends. I really appreciated his decision for choosing your hotel for this special day. You people made this event memorable not only for him but also for our whole family.
Firstly, I Am grateful for you for offering superior and high quality multi-cuisines as per our requirements. It was not so tangy and spicy that we don't admire. Moreover, i want to mention one more unforgettable thing that was tranquil ambience and arrangement of soft soothing music according to the needs of elders as they are very senative to loud noise. All the presented guests complimented to my uncle for such a fascinating decoration. The special free of cost birthday cake for birthday man was mouth-watering. Adding more, marvelous fun games especially for grey genration was magnificent idea. I was overjoyed to see happiness on faces of late adulthood in their later age.
Apart from it, it would'nt be justice if i don't talk about a meticulously groomed gentleman whose role in that special night was exceptional. He was behaving benevolently to presented relatives. He took no times to fulfill need of children, adults as well as of older folks. He welcomed all the orders with great smile on his face.
Again i would like to express my gratitude for your wonderful services.
Yours sincerely,
Hazel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9964664311 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.911407756 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660777385159 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 290.88556701 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4479669341 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4210526316 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8947368421 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118811625725 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355112276495 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308838240831 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063564528198 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420291512506 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 41.2886597938 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.