Your friend is searching for a job, write a letter to your friend.•Describe the details of the job•Why it is suitable for him/her•How to apply for the job.

Essay topics:

Your friend is searching for a job, write a letter to your friend.
• Describe the details of the job
• Why it is suitable for him/her
• How to apply for the job.

Dear James,

How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace. Based on our last discussion, I remember that how desperately you were looking for a job change.

I am so excited to tell you that there is a perfect opportunity for you in my organization, which perfectly matches your skills set. My manager is looking for a web application developer who can deliver an efficient app in Java programming language with respect to industry standards. It is basically a 2 years project overall.

Since you possess more than five years of experience in development environment, this should allow you to work on strong skills. Do you like to travel abroad for short duration? Because there are plenty of foreign travel chances to negotiate client’s requirements. Thus, I think, you’d love this job.

All you have to do is to log in to company website www.sigmacorp.com and submit your resume under career tab. It should directly get selected as I have already refer you from my end. You’ll get an interview call sooner than you thought so be prepared.

Please don’t hesitate to bug me if you have any queries regarding the job. Congratulations are in order!

Best wishes,
Sandip

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s basically a 2 years project overall. Since you possess more than five years o...
^^^
Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'referred'.
Suggestion: referred
...directly get selected as I have already refer you from my end. You'll get an in...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, thus, i think, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00966183575 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97715480321 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3494302956 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1397255451 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501921160802 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557028144705 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877828216615 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454574307762 0.0580467560999 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.