You and your friend are planning a picnic in the country side. Write:
• Which arrangements you have already done?
• Other activities that can be done
• How can your friend help with the arrangements?
Dear Manmohan,
How are you doing? I’m very excited and looking forward to our next picnic in country side of the western Pune.
As a part of planning, I’ve sorted out several things already, hope you don’t mind. First thing first, accommodation is off the list, It is a camping area on the bank of beautiful river called kabini, which should be a perfect place to enjoy natural heritage that this site has to offer. For food, the nearest hotel is 10 km far, so either we have to carry ingredients with us and have barbeque on the camp or we can drive back to hotel for meals. I’m fine either way so it’s up to you really.
There are several water sports available at the location, such as river rafting, which are at quite affordable price and I’m very keen to try it. In addition, a gigantic mountain is located at the bank of the river. Would you be interested in night track?
There is not much left to do, except for enquiry at spots center. Would my mind calling at the center and check if we need to bring our own equipment or they supply it? My car is broke down yesterday; can we take your car on the trip? I hope it’s not too much to ask.
See you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandip
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'barbequed'.
Suggestion: barbequed
...e to carry ingredients with us and have barbeque on the camp or we can drive back to hot...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, as to, except for, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48672566372 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29926764125 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66814159292 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8913351442 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150113366926 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500704171819 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455382827678 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876380314658 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039558714799 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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