Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work and retire earlier. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The age of retirement has always been a topic of debate. To which, a few people believe that people of age 60 or over should accept volunteer retirement while others argue that age should not be a deciding factor. In my opinion, if someone is fit and fine then they should invest their time in guiding future generation and allow to work till they want.
To begin with, human body wore off by 60’s and becomes very weak. Higher post or any position for that matter demands a huge commitment and hard work, which is very difficult for old people as their body is weak and vulnerable to several diseases. For instance, majority of sick leaves are taken by elderly in most organization. Moreover, they should make room for new generation who are strong, confident and energetic to work around the clock. Besides, young people deliver exceptional flexibility and aware about the technological advancements in the market, which comes very handy in the growth of organization. Thus, people should be encouraged to retire after certain age.
However, senior citizens have several things to offer, which only comes with lifetime of experience. They possess deep understanding of the core value of any business because they were the part of it since its beginning, which will be very tough for a new comer. For example, many organization have their senior executives over sixties and were a part of the organization from a long time. Moreover, If someone is fit and fine, it violation of their right to work, which cannot be broken under any circumstances. Thus, it is not mandatory to retire after some arbitrary age.
In conclusion, if somebody is physically fit, the age is just a number and should be allowed to work as long as they want. Thus, rather than discriminating, we should learn to take advantage of their intelligence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
... in guiding future generation and allow to work till they want. To begin with, human...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...ginning, which will be very tough for a new comer. For example, many organization have th...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organization seems to be countable; consider using: 'many organizations'.
Suggestion: many organizations
...ery tough for a new comer. For example, many organization have their senior executives over sixti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91961414791 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74073084155 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6219931824 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19324075756 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652786159663 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633248399476 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122292062511 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662568124758 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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