Your friend wants to spend a holiday trip with you, but it is not suitable for you. Write a letter to your friend:
explain why it is not suitable for you
giving the suggestion.
Dear Max,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad you and your family are well. So, you’re thinking of going on a holiday to Mount Buller with me. Unfortunately, I can’t accompany you because of numerous reasons.
To start with, I am afraid of height and the oxygen level in mountains is low which results in breathing problems and my blood pressure drops beyond minimum level. Secondly, I can’t bear the cold climate and my skin becomes red and itchy. On my last vacation to Switzerland, I tried going to Mount Titlis which ended up in a two days hospital stay. Now, I am a bit scared to take a risk again.
On the contrary, I will suggest you plan a trip to the Gold Coast. This place is having some of the best beaches in the world and we can enjoy your favourite activity i.e., surfing over there. We also get a chance to meet our high school friends, Mike and Sully. Accommodation won’t be a problem as Sully own a 5 bedroom house next to the beach. We can save a huge amount of money which can be used for Christmas shopping.
I hope you like the idea of this trip. Please write to me soon so that I can confirm this itinerary to Sully.
Best wishes,
Jack
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, secondly, so, well, i am afraid, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4703196347 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4819357373 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1665679304 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1875 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198557397784 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069399800902 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773382367199 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130443835139 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109087850676 0.0580467560999 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.