My name is Chitra who is residing in this locality for past three decades. I am writing to express my disappointment after knowing that the local council has planned to close “City Sports and Leisure Centre” by this month end. I would like to bring up few information on how this center was useful to us in many ways. First of all, my friends and I, leverage this center for most of our leisure activities like indoor games, conducting meetings and addressing a larger audience. Moreover, the center was majorly used to socialize with people as it was situated at the heart of the city. My marriage happened in this center which is why I am personally bonded to this centre
Also, this center was self sufficient to accomodate approximately 500 people because of which we were able to conduct functions and celebrate together. Besides that we often arrange for guest lectures on Teacher's day, Mother's day, Republic day and Independence day and conduct competitions that is suitable for all age groups. Which is why, we feel having this center is vital for our local community.
On closing this sports and leisure center, most of the socializing activities will be hindered and we will not be able to mingle as before. Also, none of the leaders would be able to address the public once this center is closed. Kindly consider keeping this center open for the public as we will be greatly affected if the center is closed permanently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...his month end. I would like to bring up few information on how this center was usef...
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little information'.
Suggestion: little information
...his month end. I would like to bring up few information on how this center was useful to us in ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91338582677 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66086981276 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586614173228 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1578839034 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122614028768 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568865126715 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588380419145 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680828093057 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493147716263 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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