Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with reference to the advertisement given in a local newspaper yesterday by your hospital that they are looking for people who are willing to work without payment.
I am a Surgeon, currently working in Pristine hospital and have got very good experience of seven years in this field. I would like to help you because it is my childhood dream to serve needy people. In fact, this is only reason I chose to become a doctor.
Since, I am a Surgeon, it would be great to perform surgeries at your hospital for free as there are a slew of patients who are in desperate need of some or the operation but deplorably can not afford to get it done.
Although, my work schedule is extremely tight but I would be able to spare morning hours on weekends and on public holidays as well. If there is an emergency then I will try to make myself available as soon as possible but I can not promise to do it every time since it depends on my busy routine.
I am looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...xperience of seven years in this field. I would like to help you because it is my...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
...t your hospital for free as there are a slew of patients who are in desperate need o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, in fact, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47692307692 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53385232927 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7062845245 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317188062312 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103178994047 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575515816795 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139771148626 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477492121795 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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