There are so many millionaires in this world but are they all felicitous? Most of the people believe that money is extremely important as it is the guarantee of merriment. However, I certainly do not agree with this notion because I feel a person needs much more than a huge bank balance to be satisfied.
To begin with, people actually aspire for the support and love of their friends and family to stay glad. It is not exaggeration to state that the condition of many rich people are in fact lamentable as they are lonely and depressed. To strengthen my view point, I would like to give an example of a very famous actor named Gurudatt who committed suicide as he was living a solitary life. In spite, of being popular and moneyed he was gloomy. Although, there are many more such examples but this one explicitly proves my point.
Furthermore, I strongly believe that affluent people have busy and stressful life as they have to work hard persistently to achieve their set goals and to compete with their peers. Due to which they scantily have some time to spend with their loved ones or to get indulge in their favourite pass time which is indeed deplorable. On the contrary, a person who is earning limited amount of money can actually enjoy more by spending time on doing things of his choice with important people in his life. Like my father being a government officer used to get many public holidays in which he used to take us to movies and picnic etc which was so cheerful.
To elucidate, to enjoy life, it is essential to have good health, helpful friends and most importantly encouraging family members who will always stand by your side in good and adverse circumstances. Because wealth is impermanent as sometimes you may lose it during unfavourable situation. Though, I cannot deny the significance of it to sustain in this world but we should not forget that it is not everything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...side in good and adverse circumstances. Because wealth is impermanent as sometimes you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, i feel, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70447761194 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62793397544 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573134328358 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5243411078 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119809193914 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389103619049 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218729951109 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072890733709 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167785845031 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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