Your local newspaper publish an advertisement asking people to help with environment projects in your area Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help Describe a local environmental issue that affects you Explain what would like to do to help

Essay topics:

Your local newspaper publish an advertisement asking people to help with environment projects in your area
Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help
-Describe a local environmental issue that affects you
-Explain what would like to do to help
-suggest how problem could be avoided in the future

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in relation to an advertisement your paper recently published asking for local volunteers to provide environmental assistance.

I would like to raise your awareness of an environmental issue that has been plaguing my local area. I live near the Gold Coast beach which in the last year has become a very popular spot with tourists and visitors. Though the beach used to be pristine and isolated, due to its growing popularity, it has become quite polluted with plastic. Also, people have begun camping on the beach and this has resulted in an increase in rubbish, particularly food and drink containers, being left behind.

To help clean up the area after visitors, I would be more than happy to arrange a group of local volunteers for a beach-cleaning event. We could pick up rubbish and also install rubbish bins at regular intervals along the sand.

While this may provide a short-term solution, to help protect the integrity of our beach and avoid further damage in the long term, I suggest that camping should be banned on the foreshore. More information signs in various languages would also help to tackle the problem.

Thank you for your time, and I look forward to the council’s action on this matter.

Yours faithfully
Tom Dick

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e that has been plaguing my local area. I live near the Gold Coast beach which in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96313364055 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71709696138 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654377880184 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8005174913 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271886672571 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988369387419 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881067157907 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136314618119 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632388587365 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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