You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter:
– Say who you are
– Give details about the accident
– Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Julian Smith, and I am writing this letter to report about a minor accident due to the slippery floor while I was shopping in one of the branches situated in the market at Gold Coast, Australia.
Let me explain the situation. As I am your esteemed customer and usually I visit to shop for the regular groceries every Friday at your store. Owing to this fact when I visited yesterday, I went towards the last rack which was placed near the refrigerator to pick up the mosquito repellent cream. Suddenly, I slipped and got my right foot injured because of the solution splashed on the surface.
Although the bruises were not so serious, your slippery floor may have some adverse impacts on to your customers. So, I advise you to change the marble floor with rubber tiles that would protect the patrons against injuries. Consequently, they would be able to move in and around your supermarket without this risk of any injury or accident.
I look forward to seeing this fixed when I visit the market next week.
Yours Faithfully
Julian Smith
Vocabulary:
1. Bruises - an injury or mark where the skin has not been broken but is darker in colour, often as a result of being hit by something:
2. Patrons - someone who uses a particular shop, restaurant, hotel, etc., especially regularly
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 16, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ulian Smith Vocabulary: 1. Bruises - an injury or mark where the skin has ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an Smith Vocabulary: 1. Bruises - an injury or mark where the skin has not...
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Line 16, column 76, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: darker
...ere the skin has not been broken but is darker in colour, often as a result of being hit by some...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of being hit by something: 2. Patrons - someone who uses a particular shop, re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, look, may, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81304347826 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54769821622 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7090996518 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127296161954 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341925859128 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367708998233 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458204191859 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512085525337 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.