Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community Write a letter to the newspaper In your letter suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like

Essay topics:

Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.

Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:

suggest someone who deserves the reward.

mention what they have done to help the community.

say what reward you would like to give this person.

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to request for you to consider Sam Williams for the award who has contributed lot for the community. He is well known social activist and stays at Westermind Road near South Park Avenue.

Firstly, he has contributed lot towards the local area. In particular, he has helped in plantation of around 5000 plants in the region. Also, have prominently recognized for all the charity he has contributed for helpless folks of the society. What is more interesting that he have been already awarded as "Social Influencer" by not only state government but national government too for his upbringing the issue of gender equality in all aspects of the culture.

It would be grateful if you could give him the award of "Local Star" along with some rewards as well. For instance, you can put charity contribution of around $500 to his "Help the Poor" foundation which will bring it in more recognition. Also, commitment can be made to take care of all the little saplings which he has forested within the area.

Thank you for consideration and cooperation.

Yours faithfully

Joshua Ford

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, as for, for instance, in particular, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14659685864 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97535171923 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.249451943 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 4.34317383033 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157472611626 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559360250783 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403616481062 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795243653571 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312983962938 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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