Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing.
Write a letter to the librarian in your letter
-describe what you like about the library
-say what you don’t like
-make suggestions for improvements
Dear Sir or Madam,
here I am writing to you to give my suggestion as requested by your team. Before I give the suggestion, I would like to tell you about the most that I like about the library.
any person, come to a temple they feel so pleasant the same way when I visit the library I feel the same and as soon as I enter I go searching for my book and study them. One great thing I love is, we can find the books very easily as you have different sections for a different type of book that saves time for whoever so come and read books.
I see some difficulties when I want to take a book home because you lack maintaining the registers as I don't find any person issues books to readers and even if I take also while returning the book I suppose to wait for a long time again that is because of the registers.
I would like to suggest that if you can upgrade the book issuance system from register to computer software, as a lot of libraries are after the same and even we can save time here as well. Should you must any information related to this I would love to help you as I wanted all the users to spend less time on finding books and getting books from the library instead of spending time in the queue.
Yours faithfully,
Bhanu Prakash
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Any
... most that I like about the library. any person, come to a temple they feel so p...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...you lack maintaining the registers as I dont find any person issues books to readers...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, i feel, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1762295082 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26808995881 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545081967213 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4342556928 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095981859161 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507573443049 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337282276096 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518089332226 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031075963875 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.56 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.