Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
• Explain reasons for the noise
• Apologize
• Describe what action you will take
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I have received a letter from your side complaining about the noise coming from my apartment. First of all, I tender my apology for the inconvenience caused.
To elucidate, I have recently moved into this new apartment as I purchased it from the previous owner and found out that the flat needed major repair works especially the washroom which was facing water leakage issues and the kitchen had no ventilation slot. In fact, the leakage from the water pipe was so bad that it was making the bedroom walls damp and thus needed immediate repair.
I would like to apologize for the inconvenience you had to face for the noise coming from my apartment as I can understand that it is irritating and disturbing kids while sleeping and studying moreover if I had known earlier that your kids were appearing for examination then I would I have postponed this repair work by a few weeks. Additionally, to reduce the noise from tomorrow onwards I would instruct the labour not to carry major repair jobs after 6 pm which will definitely reduce the level of disturbance.
I look forward to your cooperation and look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 241, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77570093458 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62771431524 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4395665826 44.8134815571 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328679619085 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144612571944 0.0766984524023 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102621488072 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191801884576 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127806056228 0.0580467560999 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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