Your neighbour keeps his pet in the garden, which has caused some troubles to your life. write a letter to your neighbour. In the letter write:
.who your and why you write this letter
.explain the problems
. give your suggestions on how to solve the problems
Dear Mr. Smith
I am Malisa, living to your next door. I am writing this letter to you to discuss about some of the issues that me and my family members are facing because of your pet, Bruno.
You are keeping your dog in the garden which is at the front of the house. It keeps on barking continuously causing trouble to my whole family as well as society. Bruno barks a lot during night and my children find difficult to concentrate on their studies, as a result, they have to face great loss in their studies. Moreover, I have to wake up early in the morning as I have to go to office and to get ready my children for school but due to noises of your pet, I am not able to take a proper sleep at night and got late in the morning. Beside that my parents are also staying with me and do not have a peaceful sleep at night because of the barks of Bruno and due to insufficient sleep, they are facing several health issues.
I request you to keep your pet inside the house during night so that it would not create disturbance to anybody.
I look forward for hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Malisa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ing this letter to you to discuss about some of the issues that me and my family members ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25943396226 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22110716012 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.230298087 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254214662547 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120642047812 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101013453889 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152202732228 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107147572609 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.