Nowadays, most of the people travel by car instead of using public means of transports. This essay shall discuss about the reasons behind this choice of individuals and measures which government should take to motivate them to use public transports.
The predominant cause of this trend is that in this era, people are living in a world where they are known by their standard of living. So, they prefer to travel, even shortest distances, by car to show-off their money to the community. Secondly, public means such as buses, take a lot of time to reach at the destination causes wastage of time. Thirdly, cars are much more comfortable than buses. Also, people can travel at any time as per their need on cars which is not possible with public transports. Fourthly, cars are now available at reasonable prices. Even, individuals with lower income can buy them. So, the use of cars is increasing day-by-day.
Moreover, social evils such as rapes, pick pocketing, snatching has become so popular in buses and trains. So, citizens travel by car for their safety. Although, using cars for travelling has numerous of advantages. But, their excessive use has caused several issues such as increase in traffic on roads, environmental pollution, wastage of fuel and list goes on.
Government should take effective measures to encourage individuals to use public transports. First of all, fares of the public transports should be reduced. Secondly, more and more transports should be available so that people do not have to wait for them. Thirdly, helpline numbers should be displayed in the vehicles so that travellers should make use of them during emergency situations and cameras should be installed to reduce crime in public means. Last but not the least, government should organise various seminars to aware people about the obstacles raised by the excessive use of private vehicles.
To conclude, I would like to say that however, cars are safer and comfortable but their use is causing huge troubles to the environment as well as to the society so it is the prime responsibility of the official authorities to take conservative measures to encourage people to use public transports.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09722222222 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75176570699 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519444444444 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8296597064 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394488404019 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11764975295 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764913690551 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215423463671 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799907512458 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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