More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport?
Nowadays, most of the individuals travel by cars rather than using public means of transports. This essay shall throw light on the reasons behind this choice of people and steps which official authorities should take to motivate the individuals to make use of public transports.
There are plethora of reasons that citizens prefer to use private transports. The predominant of all is that people are living in a world where they are praised for their high living standards. So, they use luxurious cars to travel, even walk-able distances, just to show-off their money to the community. Another reason is that is that public means for example, buses, take huge amount of time to reach at the destination because it stops at different stands for passengers. In order to save time, people travel by car.
Moving further, due to the advancement of technology, various luxurious cars have been launched with attractive bodies. People have enough money to spend on such cars for their comfort as pubic transports are not comfortable. But, excessive use of cars arise several issues, such as, traffic problem, environmental pollution, wastage of fuel, etctera.
Government has to take steps to encourage citizens of the country to use public transports. Firstly, fares of the buses should be reduced which people can easily afford in order to motivate them. Secondly, more number of public means should be available so that individuals do not have to wait for them. Last but not the least, authorities should make people aware of the problems caused by using private transports.
In conclusion, I would like to say that although cars are luxurious and comfortable mode of transportation but are causing various problems so government should make efforts to motivate individuals to use public transports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'is that'.
Suggestion: is that
... money to the community. Another reason is that is that public means for example, buses, take h...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...spend on such cars for their comfort as pubic transports are not comfortable. But, ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21649484536 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76788711626 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539518900344 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4010482051 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375810959715 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12151431045 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635274952869 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198751751372 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052994656226 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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