Nowadays, a lot of media including newspaper, magazine, television, radio and even the internet, are publishing the stories of people's private lives. Should this practice be banned?
Give reasons for your answer and write any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.
In today's era, various means of communication are available such as Newspaper, TV, Radio, Magazines, Internet and list goes on. These sources, instead of delivering news of what is happening all over the world and which issues our country is facing, are showing the private lives of celebrities as well as politicians in order to gain publicity. In my opinion, this activity should be prohibited.
Public find it amusing when social media shows the private life of actor and actresses on screen. On the other hand, people are not aware of the issue that their nation has been facing for example, corruption, difference in sex ratio, lack of education, etcetera because press is not addressing such problems to general public. So, nobody comes forward to solve these issues hence development of the country does not take place.
Moreover, teenagers have great impact on their mind's after viewing what different sources of communication deliver. They get impressed by any personality as a result groups are formed and violence is created. People indulge into fights with the members of their anti-parties.
Beside that, youngsters consider hero and heroines as their role model after getting fascinated by their lifestyle. They try to follow them in real life by performing stunts that their role models perform in movies and met with an accident causing harm to others as well. Even, people find it cool when their favorites drink or smoke on screen, they also start following them and committed various social crimes.
In conclusion, I would like to say that government should impose restrictions on media to make private life of any person as public because it retards the growth of the country. Moreover, general public should also become aware and they have to give priority to solve the issues that their nation is struggling with rather than causing danger to their lives by following their role models in real life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ress is not addressing such problems to general public. So, nobody comes forward to solve thes...
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Line 8, column 189, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ds the growth of the country. Moreover, general public should also become aware and they have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09463722397 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55117491892 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4359347097 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933516452543 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358645736427 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331302087882 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532545197364 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279339979594 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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