Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologies•describe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologies
• describe what action you will take

Dear Robert,

I am writing this letter in response to your recent letter in which you mentioned about the loud noise that broke through my apartment last Sunday. I apologize for the disturbance and inconvenience caused due to the high music.

Let me describe you the situation and the reason behind this happening. Last Sunday was an important and a special day for me as I turned 18 on that day. To celebrate the occasion, I invited few friends and relatives to my house, and for their entertainment I turned on my soundbox to play some music. Unfortunately, it behaved weird, and started peaking the volume in between. However, I tried to limit it by turning the volume down, but it seems it was uncontrollable and kept shooting the volume up in between. Ultimately, I had to turn it off and played the music on my alternate stereo system in low volume. It appears that within this short period, the sound cracked to your apartment. I sincerely regret for the trouble and unpleasantness it made to you, but can assure you that it happened unknowingly and unintentionally.

I have already spoken to the manufacturer for its repair. As the sound system is still in warranty, they will be performing a thorough diagnosis to fix the issue or will provide a replacement, so that it does not create any problem in the future.
Once again, I feel sorry for this instance and thanking you for writing this to me.

Yours sincerely,
Tom

Votes
Average: 7.5 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7609561753 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87260113354 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4907695082 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3571428571 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240698437563 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764039374796 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785961317122 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133182231912 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912483685055 0.0580467560999 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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