Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?

In this fast-moving world, due to the lack of time people often make judgments about individuals by their appearances. In this regard, some proponents have a notion that even the person's traditional values and personality traits can be easily judged by his/her outfits. In my opinion, clothing can only infer a person’s character and culture to some extent, but this cannot be generalized as a universal rule.

There is no doubt that people clothing styles are dominated by their culture because they have been living in their traditions for centuries, and they feel comfortable to acquire its style. Moreover, a child learns about his traditions from his parents and ancestors thereby leading to adoption of style from childhood. In such cases, it is easy to apprise a person’s culture by his clothes. For example, ladies in Indian culture wear sarees which is their traditional practice, so it can be conveniently judged that women in sarees belong from India. Similarly, a person’s character also dominates his clothes selection such as a benign, calm and a humble person prefers peaceful colors like white, saffron and yellow to mirror his personality.

However, this might not be true always which is because people improvise, learn and adapt to new frequently. Nowadays, people often move to disparate places for work, study or better lifestyle where they pursue new traditions alongside their own traditions. This can be best exemplified by sharing my sister’s experience who was born in India and followed Indian outfits such as wrapping sarees and carrying ethnic dresses for her initial years, but later when she traveled to Canada and got accustomed to its lifestyle, her wardrobe got transformed to skirts and trousers. Apparently, in such cases, it is implausible to conclude a person’s culture by the clothes.

To pen down the compendium, costumes can assist deduce the culture and character in some instances where people continued practicing constant behaviors and rituals but fail when people transform their nature or evolve and adopt new customs and beliefs.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, for example, no doubt, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32335329341 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87900056762 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589820359281 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1076203134 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.769230769 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251710529339 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101008870223 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513319692348 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157898446095 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381117130228 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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