Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.

Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in modern society due to lack of good relations between citizenry, knowing people’s character and their behavior is a little hard and for knowing individuals treat you can just guess about them. Some people believe that, human’s appearance is the best way to find their character and culture while others think differently. This essay will shed some light on this argument from both sides and extend my partial support to the later view before arriving at conclusion.

Humans in their first meeting try to know their partner to choose a correct situation in their future meeting. The short way for finding answer is analyse people by their appearance. If they are in a good shape and they have acceptable clothes, so they are in a great personality and culture. In these days, moreover, individuals try to wear brand clothes or suit to show themselves important. They believe that well appearance gives them this opportunity to do their work easily in society and other people try to response them by respect, because in general thought, person who has acceptable clothes have high level of culture and characters and others should see them in different way.

On the other hands, in some citizenry opinion, it is a big mistake if we judge people by their clothes. For knowing new people in their routine life not only do we need a long time to spend with them in many different situations but also, we should find their point of view on life. I mean that, for any person something is special and it is their priority so speaking about origin people according to their appearance and clothes is really dishonest. In addition, usually artist or some poets do not spend time on their look. They choose their clothes just for covering their body and try to improve their mind or skills which can distinct them from ordinary humans. Hence, people never can speak about their culture and character until they make a relationship with them and ask their idea about some crucial things. On that time the difference between real and fake persons will be shown, which just play a human rule by some Falls features in their appearance and pure individuals.

At the conclusion, I think that in new modern society that everything is show, beautiful and brilliant mind is the best criterion for measuring people’s culture and character than their clothes.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 204, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... need a long time to spend with them in many different situations but also, we should find the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, while, i mean, i think, in addition, in general, speaking about, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94763092269 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54907004582 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523690773067 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0834594048 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311224213192 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115240943297 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056522568812 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204121930742 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451773176163 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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