Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologise•describe what action you will takeWrite at least 150 words.Yo

Essay topics:

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ............,

Dear Mr. John,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in response to the compliant letter which you sent me yesterday.
Let me explain the situation. I am renovating my house, as it needs to be repaired. They have completed main hall and bed room refurbishment and started fitting modular kitchen. As , I am working and I get time only in evening, so I have informed workers to complete the work in the evening. I would like to apologies for the sound from drilling machine, which is more louder than any other equipment.
I have informed workers to complete the work as soon as possible and have rescheduled the remaining work on weekends in morning after 11 am, so that in daytime they will complete the pending stuff quickly.
I apologise once again for the problem you are facing and also I would like to invite you for house warming party which is in next month. I will notify you the exact date.
Best regards,
Saurabh Dumbre

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and started fitting modular kitchen. As , I am working and I get time only in eve...
^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'louder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: louder
...e sound from drilling machine, which is more louder than any other equipment. I have infor...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll complete the pending stuff quickly. I apologise once again for the problem yo...
^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e warming party which is in next month. I will notify you the exact date. Best r...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48120047594 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7142617176 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0909090909 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146323823497 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525519311433 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465689366657 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982890909996 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552670721575 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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