Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr Jones,
Yesterday I obtained your letter of complaint about the noise from my house. I must admit that the sound of music was excessively loud, but there are some reasons for it.
My daughter convinced both me and my wife to leave home for five hours, so that she could invite her classmates. We agreed to her, since it was her eighteenth birthday and wanted to do something special for her. However, according to my daughter, her friends soon got bored, so they decided to bring powerful speakers from their college. Therefore, while we were spending time in another place, they enabled the musical center, which created so much noise. Of course, I would have not allowed them to do it, if I had been initially aware of their decision.
In this letter, I would like to bring my apologize to you for causing so much inconvenience that day. In addition, I promise you to better check my daughter on such occasions. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know by phoning on the following number 87001444413.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75531914894 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5522770969 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707446808511 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6740535326 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165909235921 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718477736367 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757153432085 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122040739681 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078020630329 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.