Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain the problem it is causing you
Offer at least one solution
Dear Neighbor,
Trust this finds you well.
Every day, after mid-night, you start playing loud music. Although I, myself is a fan of music but playing at loudly at this time of night is not appropriate. It is causing problems for me and my household.
One of the problems is that the waves produced by bass causes windows & doors to vibrate. Sometimes strong bass, forced me to open windows even in cold breezy weather so that sound pressure pass through and doesn’t break the glass.
Secondly, my son is a school going child. I have to wake up early in the morning to carry our house chores & get him ready for school. Because of loud music, not just me but by my son as well loses sleep and then it becomes very hard for us to sleep again.
You are kindly requested to keep volume down, so that we enjoy peaceful sleep. Another solution is to sound proof your lounge. This way sound waves will be absorbed in the proofing material and wont disturb us.
I hope you will consider my solution.
Thanks
Your Neighbor
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56216216216 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27690713462 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5020703313 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2857142857 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2142857143 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264148737713 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892066940295 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819914676448 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860381552213 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657837642589 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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