Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain the problems it is causing you
• offer at least one solution
Dear Mr. Wilson,
I have enjoyed living next door to you for the past year and getting to know you as a neighbor. In the interest of maintaining a good neighborly relationship, I would like to bring a small problem to your attention.
I generally go to bed by ten o’clock in the evening. Recently, I have noticed that you enjoy listening to music at night, often as late as midnight or later. You may not be aware that the volume is high enough for me to hear the music in my bedroom. Often, I have trouble falling asleep because of the music. This is a problem for me since I have to get up at 5:30 A .M . in order to get to work on time.
I wonder if you would consider listening to the music at a lower volume. Or, you might enjoy your music in another room of your house that is farther away from my bedroom window. That way you could still play your music, and I could sleep better. Please come over to my house anytime and we can discuss this matter more, if you would like.
Your neighbor,
Mark Jones
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24489795918 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32299926702 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9281910372 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400472103618 0.216113520407 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134736838564 0.0766984524023 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807917131222 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249276449807 0.12726935374 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341172471466 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.