Your office building doesn't have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
• Explain the problem
• Suggest a solution
• Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns of not having a parking facility in our office building. This is a worrisome situation for many of us who use personal automobiles to commute to work.
Due to the non parking facility most of the employees rely on the paid parking services. Unfortunately, the amount they charge is exorbitant and creates a twinning hole from their pockets. The closest transit to any public transport systems is 3 kilometers away from the office where the employees either need to plan well in advance to reach the starting point or take an arduous walk which make them disgruntled and be less productive at work.
Would you please provide an alternate parking space in the vicinity of the office or let the employees avail the pick up and drop-out options of the “Smart bikes” company which would greatly help them to reach the office within the stipulated time and makes our atmosphere Eco-friendly.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Teena
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15730337079 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77971828305 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668539325843 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.7002933285 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 102.0 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184970604647 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753712347628 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696570397525 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803736035959 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464512449574 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.