You recently attended a meeting at a hotel When you returned home you found you had left some important papers at the hotel Write a letter to the manager of the hotel 1 Say where you think you left the papers 2 Explain why they are so important 3 Tell the

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

1- Say where you think you left the papers.

2- Explain why they are so important

3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir,

I am penning down this epistle in connection with important documents which I regrettably misplaced at the room I stayed in your hotel Rose garden London last weekend.

I stayed in your executive suite from October 14th till October 16th and attended a business conference held at the main hall on October 15th. After my departure and return to Delhi, I noticed that I missed those documents at the suite, perhaps I remember it must be on the drawer beside the bed.

Those are extremely important papers which includes my company financial information and the notes I took during the conference. Without these, I will be in big trouble.

Finally, I would plead to conduct a thorough search in the suite and have all the papers under your possession. I will send out a staff of mine to collect it for me or Perhaps, will fly to London to gather it personally.

Your swift action is highly awaited and thank you very much for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Tom

Votes
Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81871345029 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65051020303 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6164124093 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110338667075 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345516387134 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350359579587 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558827655891 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350041369741 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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