Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him/her. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Liza,
Hope you are going well. Unfortunately, I cannot able to come to the movie during this weekend as my son is terribly ill from last night. I am sorry about it.
I know how much effort and time you spent to plan this and the ticket is also refundable. Therefore, I have asked my younger brother Rahul to accompany you and he confirmed that he will join you for the movie.
Also, the last time when we spoke, you had told me about starting a new business. My brother is an expert at it. He is running some successful online ventures and I am sure you can get ropes from him. He is a friendly guy and you will cherish his company. Do let me know in advance if he can join you.
Really sorry for my unavailability and I assure you that we can hang out next month.
Lots of love,
Teena
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30967741935 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31832944268 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0828085601 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.6666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9166666667 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296785555175 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103074645834 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725389136931 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175459934106 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380628082255 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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