You are working in an international company, write a letter to inform your manager about your resignation. In your letter, you should: thank the company for the opportunity that you joined it tell the reason for your resignation confirm the time you are

Essay topics:

You are working in an international company, write a letter to inform your manager about your resignation. In your letter, you should: thank the company for the opportunity that you joined it tell the reason for your resignation confirm the time you are leaving

Dear Mr. Ram,

I am writing this epistle to notify you of my resignation from my position of Manager at ANZ Bank.

I would like to thank you for selecting me for this job. It was an honor to be a part of your team. I am so pleased with the positive environment and opportunities I earned from every one of the staff. My days in our company with the supervision of you developed me into a more skilled and experienced person. I gained worthful knowledge from you.

It’s a hard decision for me to take, however, because of my travel time of commuting between my home and to our office is making me quite restless as I am spending several hours on the road. Therefore, finding it very difficult to spend some quality time with my family especially children. Another reason is that, I have got new job in another company which is nearby my home so from then on, I can able to fulfill my personal and professional commitments.

This month end is my last working day at our office and please let me know if you need any assistance in my working days.

Again, thank you for the extended support and it was indeed a great experience working with you.

Yours Sincerely,

Tom

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56944444444 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61347410808 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4898277988 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260388294576 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111743555719 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760171176381 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157324659294 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897345932632 0.056905535591 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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