Your recently bought a smartphone from a specailized store, but it is not working properly. you have called the shop several times but no action has been taken.
write an email to the shop manager, in your letter
give details of the mobile phone you purchased and when you bought it.
describe the problems you are having with the smartphone
explain what happened when you called the shop
tell the manager what you would like him to do
Dear sir or madam,
I am Harry Martin, I recently bought an Iphone-XR from your shop. But unfortunately, the phone is not working properly. I am writing this letter to complain about the same.
Actually, it was my 3rd wedding anniversary on 23rd june so i thought of gifting this smart phone to my wife so I bought this phone on 22nd evening. It is a gold color 128 GB storage phone, I have enclosed the copy of invoice for further details. Let me elucidate the issues, when my wife opened the box, she found the earplugs were missing. Also when we tried to start the phone it did not launch. I tried charging it for two hours but the problem remained same then I charged it with using my other charger. Moreover, We realized another bigger problem when my wife made a call to her parents to share her happiness about the gift but her happiness did not last long as the phone got disconnected again and again and the voice quality was also very low.
I called to your shop multiple times and all time I have to explain my problems from scratch to new person. They promise me that a delivery boy will replace my old phone to a new phone soon but it did not happen and its been two-week for the same process. I would like to mention you that I purchased this expensive phone from my hard-earned money.
To compensate for such mistake and inconvenience I want you to send me new working phone(same model and features) as soon as possible. If this time also my complaint is ignored or necessary actions will be taken I will write the complaint to consumer court. For any clarification or further details, you can contact me at 401-401-4011.
Hope to get a positive revert from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Harry Martin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...3rd wedding anniversary on 23rd june so i thought of gifting this smart phone to ...
^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...x, she found the earplugs were missing. Also when we tried to start the phone it did...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 314.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5127388535 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51426414678 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 290.88556701 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0588580908 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3529411765 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226367514432 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774645675028 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689489267537 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140740027038 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07131136832 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.