Your Saturday hasn't Overseas shouldn't buy a University. you want some information for you to go to university right to a student officer in your letter.
Add him / her about the accommodation.
The transportation facilities
The class schedule
Dear Sir<br>
<br>
I recently take admission in your esteemed University for the MBA course which commencing this September. The purpose of mine to penning down epistol is to you to seek the information about living facility, transport and class schedules etcetera before coming to Australia.<br>
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As I am the native dweller of India and before it, I could not come Australia due to this I will novice to the ambience of Australia. Hence, I would like to know about the accommodation facilities which are given by you to an overseas student whether the university offers halls of residence or students have to find flats themselves? Apart from this, if student is living in a flat of a nearby society then what transportation facilities available there. I have tried to find out on the Internet but all my efforts are gone to vain because I could not get the proper data from it.<br>
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Moreover, I could also like to know about the class schedules properly that when the classes would ushered in so that I will come there before you embarked the session.<br>
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I would be very grateful if you give the details of these things as early as possible so that in future I would not face the major hurdles during my study and able to combat with them to ward off myself from critical situations.<br>
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I look forward to hearing from.<br>
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Yours faithfully 8th febraury 2018<br>
<br>
Aman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schedules'' or 'schedule's'?
Suggestion: schedules'; schedule's
...ut living facility, transport and class schedules etcetera before coming to Australia.
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...proper data from it.
Moreover, I could also like to know about the cl...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'usher'
Suggestion: usher
...es properly that when the classes would ushered in so that I will come there before you...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57959183673 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.6650210448 2.54303337028 419% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 16.3608247423 299% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.482253728 44.8134815571 579% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.4 76.5299724578 357% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.0 16.8248392259 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.8 4.34317383033 295% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744282362876 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750040666174 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356865632887 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703499516956 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676328657811 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 8.37731958763 351% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 70.7449484536 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 7.45979381443 284% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 8.71597938144 183% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 8.54432989691 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 8.15463917526 270% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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