Some people believe the range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor people and rich people. Others think it is having an opposite effect. Discuss these points of view. What is your opinion?
Some people thought that the technology currently increasing the space between wealthy people and poor people. But other are condemned to the statement. I will put a my views in upcoming paragraphs.<br>
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In Modern era technology is very increasingly and the peoples are also updated by day full stop there are most effective thing is schools and colleges. Richest parents was educated their children in their dance school where the every facilities are available and updated by their Technology bus stop such as science lab computer lab are available but the poor people do not send children in the booth school because they lack of funds and good schools is much expensive similar to normal schools and the normal schools do not have computers in school they will not updated in modern time.<br>
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In other hand some people think that is good for everyone now a days in modern technology ever equipment is here for doing any work like in fast and person can do work with hands but in Modern era people are depend on machines they were think that it is good for Savings time and Person will do many work with the help of machines in addition in agriculture there are many differences in past and present time for example in modernlisation the farmers will doing work in land with machines.<br>
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In my opinion everyone have their own ways but according to me technology do not affect yo person. it is only to person if the person to work with smart way and they do not think about the other people likes witness to the gap they do not generate thinking in rich and poot people.<br>
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In conclusion every people have a round was I do not deny of any of them but I could you get any person to work in on condition they do not copy to other people for the person with sucess in our life
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a; my
... condemned to the statement. I will put a my views in upcoming paragraphs.
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
... day full stop there are most effective thing is schools and colleges. Richest parent...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Richest'.
Suggestion: The Richest
...ffective thing is schools and colleges. Richest parents was educated their children in ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'update'
Suggestion: update
... have computers in school they will not updated in modern time.
In other han...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... people think that is good for everyone now a days in modern technology ever equipment is ...
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Suggestion: a day; days
...ple think that is good for everyone now a days in modern technology ever equipment is ...
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Suggestion: thought
...people are depend on machines they were think that it is good for Savings time and Pe...
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Suggestion: many works
...ood for Savings time and Person will do many work with the help of machines in addition i...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
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...mple in modernlisation the farmers will doing work in land with machines.
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... me technology do not affect yo person. it is only to person if the person to work...
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...y people have a round was I do not deny of any of them but I could you get any person to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56134969325 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45039806472 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469325153374 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 363.812589117 49.4020404114 736% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.4 106.682146367 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.2 20.7667163134 314% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208387060293 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155282940614 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949285834218 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147491416932 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765631155674 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.0946893788 249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.06 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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