Nowadays in many countries people are following the latest fashion, hairstyle and so on. Why are they so influenced by fashion? Is it a positive or negative development?
It is an undeniable fact that people have been fond of latest fashions, hairstyles and innovations of technology over the last few years. I believe this craze has left a lot of pros and cons in the society and I think there are several causes behind this influence, some of the them will be discussed in this essay below and I think it is a positive development.
To begin with, human beings have always been keen to practise, try and adopt the latest development or lifestyle in their lives basically in developing countries. I think the prime reason of this trend is globalisation due to which m...
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