In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?
Sports play a magnificent role to uplift the standard of health, wealth and relationships. Gone are the days when the players were passionate to win the game for their desires and the world records. But, nowadays, the monetary prizes and the fame have major influence on the sports players. Here, this essay will examine the effects and the consequences produced by this phenomenon.
Multifarious bad influences can be the outcome of this approach. First and foremost, the young emerging players are expected to lose the spirit of sportsmanship. For instance, they may get encouraged to harm the o...
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As far as the affects on
As far as the affects on sports are concerned
As far as the effects on sports are concerned
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"Besides this, the desires of
"Besides this, the desires of getting more prevalence could exist the feeling of envy among players as well"
exist(v) ==> intransitive ==> it cannot have an object.
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Besides this, the desires of getting more prevalence could exist by the feeling of envy among players as well
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