People of different cultures change their way of looking by changing hair color, cosmetics, jewellery. surgery why do you think people do this. is it good to do
Due to modernization, people from all over the world, are diverting their lifestyle from simplicity towards luxury and western appearance. This is due to the fact that they try to adopt modern lifestyle, gain popularity and beatify their look. In this essay, I will contend these reasons in more detail and elaborate its positive and negative consequences.
Firstly, change in look has become a symbol of rich and luxurious lifestyle. For example, in every country and culture, women, who are wearing expensive jewellery and clothes, often recognized as rich personalities of the society as compar...
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people used to changes with the diversity in the society
people are used to changes with the diversity in the society
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