There is a controversial debate surrounding the issue of human improvement throughout the globe in this era. It is said that a century people claimed that human beings were constantly progressing in all aspects of life. In contrast, people don’t firmly state this idea these days. In my point of view, nowadays, man is definitely making advancement, although some subjects have achieved less and some more. In this essay I am going to delve into these issues.
On the one hand, when it comes to science and technology, every one persistently asserts that human generation is escalating the steps of achievement so fast. It is widely manifest that everyday scientist are unifying their efforts to upgrade their inventions and make it more sophisticated. For example, in case of electronic gadgets, cellphones and computers companies are in intensive competition to reveal a new model every year that could properly lore their customers. Not only are these transparent in term of smart electronic devices, humanity is facing progress in other majors of science world such as medicine or nuclear.
On the other hand, it is generally obvious that human could not demonstrate a satisfactory improvement in people life like family formation these years. Though people formerly could be readily victorious in making family and more vital remaining this family core for several years no matter how overwhelming it is, these days, the rate of divorces is transparently illustrate human was unsuccessful in this area. For instance, before this, whenever a couple married, they promise their mates have endless life and this was exactly happening. But, now the possibility that a couple could live regardless of separation is approximately fifty percent.
To sum up, the idea that advancement is not met by humanity thoroughly in all branches is almost reality. Although there are immense improvement regarding science and technology, other parts of life like matrimony are sacrificing gradually. It is a hope that in the future everyone could be beneficiary of possessing a bright life alongside with other development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33928571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97237851116 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9741775348 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170026884441 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491093877841 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045425827923 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938421842077 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246468320944 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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