100 years ago people thought that human race was steadily making progress in all areas of life, nowadays there is less certainty that is so. In what areas do you think the most important progress has been made so far? In what areas more things need to be done?
It was believed by some people that our world has been experienced significant changes in all fields of life. However, in modern days, people may claim that these changes are only recorded in certain areas such as Medicine and Technology while there are still some limitations in Pollution and the Medicine itself.
First of all, it is undeniable that, Medicine has drastically changed over a few decades. Not only private clinics but State hospitals also provide better medical care for their patients, accompanying with a crew of skilled doctors and nurses. This is result from the proper allocation of Government’s money to upgrade hospital infrastructures and invest on comprehensive hospital staff training courses. Modern medicine also witnesses a huge success of a wide range of vaccine inventions which enables people with constraint of health to live some years longer or even be saved from fatal diseases such as HIV. Let’s take Cuba as an example of a very developed medicine nation where the lowest death rate in children below 5 has been recorded amongst other countries all over the world.
In the era of technology, modern society as well as ordinary people have gained great benefits from technology in many ways. Internet is such a way. By having a connected laptop, people are allowed to be multi-task while they are in the same place, which is totally impossible as in the past. Additionally, advanced technology has made people’s life become more convenient in the sense that daily activities such as shopping or bank transactions are incredibly completed by a mouse click. The role of human labor in production line has also significantly changed due to technology revolution, in which robots are constantly utilized to replace manual labor.
However, some people may claim that these notable changes in Medicine and Technology are still not enough. The dark side of technology development is that when it is excessively used, it is likely to lead to adverse impact on how people interact with the world. When young people have to deal with tough things, they tend to turn to virtual friends instead of having direct consultants. Accordingly, this abandonment of real relationship could result in the weakness in family bond and reduction in the sense of community.
Another heated social problem in modern days is the concern about environmental pollution. Fast-pace and industrial life have contributed a great amount of pollutants into the environment on a daily basis. Accumulated rubbish from household activities, gases and toxic emissions from factories and vehicles are heavily polluted the surrounding environment, making it unfit for people and animals to live in.
In conclusion, the world is experiencing great success in some certain areas while some others should be taken more proper attention to improve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...aken more proper attention to improve.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2411.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27571115974 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90232042378 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573304157549 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4096905957 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.55 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.85 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108516496171 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309653570291 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309081152264 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615916319516 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319823982853 0.056905535591 56% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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