3. These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this?
Do you think it is a positive or a negatives development?
Nowadays, more and more husbands agree completely to look after children and doing housework in social lives. There are various reasons for this view, so i think that it is a positive trend to need much understanding.
There are several causes of why a lot of fathers could not leave their house to gain occupation. Firstly, with modern life, the larger of women might be extremely desired to pursue their career and very busy, therefore, helping of their husband is quite important. Secondly, the role of each person depends on their ability to divide available tasks for everyone while in the past, the breadwinners in families attach entirely with husband’s obligation. For example, my friend’s husband has landed housework and take care of children after a long time of unemployment, whereas, my friend might be completely busy in company to earn more money, so they dicided that husband would be continued that role because it is difficult to land a job in that time. Finally, the househusband could be more common, rather than much more husbands would prefer spending time on their baby to pursue vocation.
In my opinion, this change’s role in families progress perfectly. With the rising cost of living, couple should be careful to make decision who go out to earn money, who stay at home in order to assume childcare responsibilities. In addition, it is better equal role in families if society could be significant transformable in traditional minds. Therefore, women could be entirely time to follow their career after having baby and men could also give up their job to have more free time with baby without criticism of anyone. For example, in the past, my grandfather did not allow my mother following her favorite job such as teacher to look after children, but nowadays, when grandfather has been observed a bunch of wives who have breadwinners role in families, his view is opened mind.
In conclusion, more wives could be much opportunities in securing job and the husbands who agree childcare obligation would create much more progress and equal humanity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
.... In conclusion, more wives could be much opportunities in securing job and the h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07225433526 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82875934785 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6753972349 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263938966605 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926977031321 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374382708637 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157475098982 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439774052938 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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