Advantages and disadvantage of using social media
It is a universal truth that there has been an ongoing trend towards using social networking sites in recent years, prompted by the proliferation of digital devices like smartphones or tablets. In this essay, I will outline both the advantages and disadvantages of engagement in some form of social media.
On the one hand, there are myriad benefits of social networks that bring to human life. First, it is a virtual platform that could connect every people around the world. It means people can keep in touch with their friends and relatives anytime and anywhere or even find the other half of their life through the Internet. Second, people could easily keep update on the news and know what goes on with their friends. They also can show their personal life by posting some family or selfie photos and receive comments from others in the online world so that people never feel abandoned. Last but not least, using online sites could enrich people's knowledge in many aspects of life. For example, they can learn from a video on Facebook about the dire repercussion of the environmental contamination caused by human activities, and then their awareness about environmental problems will be raised.
On the other hand, joining in online social networking also do the users a disservice. Many people, especially the young generation who uses sites such as Facebook or Instagram are obsessed with their social media profile. It means they want to look as perfect as possible in their photos and try hard to improve their physical appearance. That can put a strain on not only their physical but also mental health. Another pronounced drawback is that social media are considered as a distraction that deprives the valuable time of people for family and study.
In conclusion, I believe that social media could bring both the pros and cons to people based on the ways we used it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91823899371 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5345287693 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0720775656 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248454186902 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852604758288 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105700554218 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196170415155 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111257929172 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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