advantages and disadvantages of social networking.
Social networking has become is an essential part of modern life owing to an enormous number of advantages. However, it also has a lot of negative influences on people.
I firmly believe that it would be more benefits for people to do many different things. First, social networking means we can keep in touch with acquaintances and family easily. For example, if a person has relatives in another country, they may keep in contact using Facebook. Second, social networking makes it possible for people to up to date latest news. Often when a news story breaks, social websites help us hear the experiences and opinions of the people where the news is happening. Finally, it helps us have an enormous wealth of new friends who are in the world. For instance, through Facebook, you are able to make new friends who you may have never met before.
On the other hand, social networking might exert adverse impacts on users. Social networking addiction becomes one of the popular problems of young people. A majority of youth spend a great deal of time on social networking such as Facebook, Google+, Instagram, and Twitter. As a result, excessive social networking use isolates them from different activities and makes them indifferent to the real world. This also would lead to the significant decrease in work efficiency and academic performance. In addition, sometimes people think they are talking online to someone friendly, but it might be a dangerous stranger for the reason that nobody knows the true identity of some people using social websites.
In conclusion, I believe that, although social networking has many benefits, it also has a lot of disadvantages. Therefore, taking advantages of social networking should be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0979020979 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78394585805 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7519776735 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164310191559 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057901912422 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549530129632 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112939094378 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536741001129 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.