Advantages and disadvantges of watching TV on children.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Nowadays , television has become the most popular ...
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Suggestion: .
...s become the most popular media of human . it plays an important role in our daily...
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...ecome the most popular media of human . it plays an important role in our daily li...
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...y life such as supply international news , some shows and channels offer education...
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...n easy and cheap source of entertainment,... From long ago,human has invented a v...
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...urce of entertainment,... From long ago,human has invented a video transmitter that t...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: And
... mainly consist of live video and audio.And we usually called it is television.Firs...
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....And we usually called it is television.First of all,we can got a lot of information ...
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...lly called it is television.First of all,we can got a lot of information and knowle...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
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Suggestion: get
...ed it is television.First of all,we can got a lot of information and knowledge by w...
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...nformation and knowledge by watching tv.For example,when we are free,we can watch D...
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Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...and knowledge by watching tv.For example,when we are free,we can watch Discovery chan...
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...watching tv.For example,when we are free,we can watch Discovery channels to explore...
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...he best time' Carmelo Anthony said.Exactly,tv can do it. television helps keep fam...
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Suggestion: , tv
... time' Carmelo Anthony said.Exactly,tv can do it. television helps keep family...
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Suggestion: , so
...ision helps keep family members together,so we can feel close to family members whe...
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...nding money after hours stressful work. we have many different ways of entertainin...
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Suggestion: many
...ney after hours stressful work. we have many different ways of entertaining,but buying a telev...
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...have many different ways of entertaining,but buying a television and using it daily ...
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Suggestion: , television
...arly a low - cost option. In my opinion,television is one of the most of useful media beca...
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Suggestion: Finally
...ul media because of it is many benefits.Finally,watching tv, can be good or bad,depend ...
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...a because of it is many benefits.Finally,watching tv, can be good or bad,depend on how to...
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....Finally,watching tv, can be good or bad,depend on how to use the tv to serve our lives...
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... on how to use the tv to serve our lives .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24017467249 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50353338025 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650655021834 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.78342835 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184409100684 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735097640205 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623767771689 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999925012994 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545295546666 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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