Advantages and disadvantges of watching TV on children.
Nowadays, television has become the most popular media of human. it plays an important role in our daily life such as supply international news, some shows and channels offer educational programs that can increase our knowledge and television are an easy and cheap source of entertainment ,...
From long ago, human has invented a video transmitter that transmits content mainly consist of live video and audio. And we usually called it is television. First of all, we can be gotten a lot of information and knowledge by watching tv. For example, when we are free, we can watch Discovery channels to explore our natural around the world and it brings about many sources information education for both adults and children.
"family time is the best time" Carmelo Anthony said.Exactly, tv can do it. television helps keep family members together, so we can feel close to family members when watching certain tv shows .watching television is a way for the whole family to share touch and beautiful memories.
Beside the stressful work hours, watching tv is a simple and inexpensive way of the spending money after hours stressful work. we have many different ways of entertaining, but buying a television and using it daily is clearly a low - cost option.
In my opinion, television is one of the most useful media because of many benefits .Finally ,watching tv, can be good or bad, depend on how to use the tv to serve our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95867768595 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79072782343 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640495867769 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7448608619 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179281631035 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641039655528 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063745737372 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978698338503 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530000712685 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.