The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from
home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages?
Share personal examples in your essay.
The Internet has revolutionized the world in many different ways. Among these, it
has made it possible for people to work from home. Despite the many advantages
that may derive from this arrangement, it is felt that working from home is predominantly
disadvantageous to the professional. This will be proven by looking at how
the home sets professionals up to be both distracted and unable to detach themselves
from work.
For one, although working from home may be effective for many, most people are
likely to get distracted under these conditions. For example, a former manager of
mine once delegated a writing task to me and instructed me to complete it at home.
When I went to engage the project, I found it difficult to stay focused in an environment
I traditionally relaxed in, and as a result the quality of my work suffered. My
experience clearly shows that for people like myself, working from home is disadvantageous
to productivity.
In addition to this, the stay-at-home worker often finds it challenging to distance
themselves from their work, and this can be mentally exhausting. For instance, a
colleague of mine started his own business from home. Within the first few months,
he was receiving telephone calls, emails and faxes at all times of the day and night.
In the end, he felt forced to migrate this professional pursuit to a rented office
apartment simply because it was taking over his life. As this story illustrates, the
disadvantages of a home-based job are numerous.
To conclude, despite advantages of lower overhead and independence, working from
home has many more drawbacks than favourable points. It is thus hoped that professionals
everywhere think carefully before settling on this working arrangement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...nternet has revolutionized the world in many different ways. Among these, it has made it poss...
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Line 14, column 73, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'distancing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: distancing
...-home worker often finds it challenging to distance themselves from their work, and this c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22377622378 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11358482856 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7571339317 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231668271705 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910651260021 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066413463976 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729547261897 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754599435506 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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