Advertisement brings many negative effect on people and the society. What are these problem? How to solve this problems?
It is undeniable that advertisements are the major source of information through which people will be informed about the latest technology and and product in the markets. Presently, people believe that the increasing number of advertisement has bad impact on the society and on individuals. Here, this essay intends to discuss about the effects of advertisement and the possible solution to tackle this issue.
There are manifold points to endorse how the advertisement has badly affect on the society and on human beings. First and the foremost, people are being extravagant on shopping of different products because of being influenced of different attractive advertisement related to products. To demonstrate, Companies pay much amount of money to advertisement team
to disseminate the information of their product. Then, advertisement team adds species to their information and also tells about special discount , offers and so on which really influence people to buy unnecessary product. Due to which, the quantity of solid wastes and non-degradable products like plastics increase and automatically the problems of pollution, degradation of land arise on the environment of our society. Besides that, many younger get influenced by the advertisement of various facial products . Then, they buy them with the imagination of getting glowing, flawless skin and to remove acnes. Unfortunately, some products have side effects on their faces instead of making beautiful. Taking a real life example into consideration, I have a problem of acnes on my oily face. So, I brought a face cream which was told by the advertisement on television but, it was worthless. Consequently, Advertisement provides the information which only bad effect on the community and on people.
What can be done to combat these effects. Firstly, the government make strict rules and regulation for the advertisement agency that they should not be allowed to disseminate the information of wrong products. If they do like that, their licenses of producing advertisement should be canceled and should be charged with money. What is more, people should be conscious and should not be easily influenced by the wrong information related to the products they are using in their daily lives. Lastly, public awareness should be raised among people telling that how people are becoming hypocrite by providing wrong information through advertisement to earn money.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, nowadays, people depend on advertisement to buy something new. But, It is clear that, it has negative impact on the society and makes the people life worse. So both the government and the public should take their responsibility to eliminate the bad impacts of advertisement from the depth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, really, so, then, as to, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44626168224 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15275511129 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518691588785 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.389048025 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.954545455 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23484288721 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692967839373 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345796323066 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126163231723 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02322316024 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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